The Newcomer by Mary Kay Andrews

The Newcomer Book Cover The Newcomer
Mary Kay Andrews
Fiction
St. Martin's Press (May 4, 2021)

Mary Kay Andrews, the New York Times bestselling author and Queen of the Beach Reads delivers her next page-turner for the summer with The Newcomer.

In trouble and on the run...

After she discovers her sister Tanya dead on the floor of her fashionable New York City townhouse, Letty Carnahan is certain she knows who did it: Tanya’s ex; sleazy real estate entrepreneur Evan Wingfield. Even in the grip of grief and panic Letty heeds her late sister’s warnings: “If anything bad happens to me—it’s Evan. Promise me you’ll take Maya and run. Promise me.” So Letty grabs her sister’s Mercedes and hits the road . . .

With a trunkful of emotional baggage...

and her wailing four-year-old niece Maya. Letty is determined to out-run Evan and the law, but run to where? Tanya, a woman with a past shrouded in secrets, left behind a “go-bag” of cash and a big honking diamond ring—but only one clue: a faded magazine story about a sleepy mom-and-pop motel in a Florida beach town with the improbable name of Treasure Island. She sheds her old life and checks into an uncertain future at The Murmuring Surf Motel.

The No Vacancy sign is flashing & the sharks are circling...

And that’s the good news. Because The Surf, as the regulars call it, is the winter home of a close-knit flock of retirees and snowbirds who regard this odd-duck newcomer with suspicion and down-right hostility. As Letty settles into the motel’s former storage room, she tries to heal Maya’s heartache and unravel the key to her sister’s shady past, all while dodging the attention of the owner’s dangerously attractive son Joe, who just happens to be a local police detective. Can Letty find romance as well as a room at the inn—or will Joe betray her secrets and put her behind bars? With danger closing in, it’s a race to find the truth and right the wrongs of the past.

I loved the cover art, the plot was promising, but the story fell flat.

I don’t enjoy delivering news that a book was less than grand; however, honest reviews must remain honest. The Newcomer by Mary Kay Andrews had a strong start, and I was invested in the beginning. As the story was built, it felt more and more disjointed. We’re bounced between perspectives without a clean transition between the two. It disrupted an already unnatural storytelling.

The hard hitting intense scenes seemed a little comedic. When we met the undercover FBI agent, it was a little corny. The dialogue in that scene was a lot of sentences stating “the obvious” in ways that normal people in conversation wouldn’t speak. This is also true of the “aha, gotcha” moments when they’re talking to the bad guys. Those conversations did not feel authentic.

In wrapping this up, I’ll mention that the romance story was too rushed and too forced. Joe was almost desperate to be with Letty, to the point of aggression and forcing her to feel guilt for not being ready. That’s not a set up for a relationship readers will root for. At one point when he’s professing his love, he’s mad and impatient that she has to make her niece a priority over him. How is that ok? Why does she love and want him after he behaves like a child?

This book was really close, but missed the mark in a few areas.

As always, I’m very grateful for the chance to read this book in exchange for an honest review.

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